Wednesday, October 16, 2013

Scare

It was a cloudy day in Topa. Vanessa's house was dark and lonely.  But Vanessa was smart. She made a list about fun stuff: puzzles, mum and dads. 

"AAAAHHHH!"

She was in a hurricane, then she saw... HER HOUSE!!!  
But her scarecrows?  Oh no, scarecrows scare! This is going to be a scary adventure! (Vanessa had millions of adventures).

"AAAARRRROOOOWWWW  AAAARRRROOOOWWWW!  RRRR!" Oh no, werewolves were attacking! 

Vanessa saw a diamond sword and …WHOOSH the head of the werewolves. 

AAAAAHHHH BOOM! She was back in her house and it was BEAUTIFUL and light and Vanessa was very happy.           

Penelope

5 comments:

  1. Wow Peny youdid a good work.

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  2. Penny I love your story.

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  3. It's very very funny! Penny I love it!

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  4. A whirlwind, scarecrows and werewolves, all in a hundred words!

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  5. Thank you for your lovely comments.

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